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The Snake Vs. the Human
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 07:25:34 AM in AEST
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Glossy-hued serpents dance across the desert;
humans tip-toe in fear across each sun-heated granule.
Snakes smile with open mouths proudly displaying their fangs;
humans camouflage their deadliest weapons.
Snakes strike against their enemies;
humans often dig their fangs in friends.
Snakes never make promises;
humans break them.
Snakes fight fairly;
humans sucker punch!
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Re: The Snake Vs. the Human
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by Fuzzy on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 07:34:30 AM AEST
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Makes sense for me,like the
way, you have written this
very clever write, very
well written.
Take care
Fuzzy
Snakes strike against their enemies;
humans often dig their fangs in friends.
Snakes never make promises;
humans break them.
Snakes fight fairly;
humans sucker punch!
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Re: The Snake Vs. the Human
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 10:31:45 AM AEST
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Snakes or animals of any kind act of instinct. Humans quite often act out of malice and I love the analogies you have drawn here. Once again, an enjoyable read about humans, who are frequently, in my opinion, the lowest life form.
Thanks,
Tim
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