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Swan Song
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 02:21:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Little, did you know , as the morn broke, as you
raise , your majestic neck, from under wing
was mid May, cygnets, just left the nest now
they follow, to the waters edge, with your
soul-mate at your side, Regal, proud, you
swim, in early morning sun,cygnets follow
down stream,you turn to see them safe.
soul-mate, Turns to look, Regal Swans
you drift, down stream, cygnets Dream
~Have you heard a Mute Swan Cry~
Then,your love, gathers speed, along
the water, then takes flight, you watch
as he soars above, The distance a
Thunder you hear, Strikes fear in your
Heart, you Turn again, your cygnets
Drift with you, now, so faraway your
soul-mate does fly, Twelve bore shot
him down, Regal bird fell from
the sky, As a Man laughs
took, your soul-mates life an
illegal Kill, just for his Thrill
Your love, soul-mate, carcass
lay dead, upon the ground
~Have you heard a Mute Swan Cry~
Copyright ©
Fuzzy
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2010-03-11 02:21:40]
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Re: Swan Song
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 03:41:10 AM AEST
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| Senseless killing.... your love, soul-mate carcass lay dead.... this beautiful poem made me feel every bit of the sadness of the loss of a beautiful creature, great write paul x |
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Re: Swan Song
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 06:43:06 AM AEST
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Such a sadness within your words that is just magnified by the repeated line, "Have you heard a Mute Swan Cry ". Absolutely devastating to the heart. Your piece is painfully gripping.
Seléne ~ |
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Re: Swan Song
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 01:57:48 PM AEST
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Powerful words written in a thick sadness that leaves heartbreak in you. Painfully sad but a very good write.
take care
duff |
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Re: Swan Song
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 08:08:40 AM AEST
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Hauntingly magnificent.......
The death of innocence in it's purity is so damned unforgivable in any circumstance.
Really nicely written x
Star x x x |
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