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Screwed head, Red eyes

Contributed by Harsh on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:51:40 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Screwed head, Red eyes is all that now remains
Rough stubble, Hot ears is all that now pains
New day, Old work is driving me insane
Glass tears, Warm thoughts it’s all now the same

Blue sky, Pink dress has become a stranger here
Sad face, Heavy chest, this road is going where
Sour thoughts, Foul tongue is all that now appears
Bowed neck, Damp skin with infinity of layers

Young smell, Fresh taste, I once felt alive
Heart beats, Embrace were all in the hive
Curly hair, Broad smile was once there in my life
Some say girl friend, some said she was my wife

All that has lost, there is fire in the rain
I weep and cry, just missed the last train
The bliss and laughs are now down the drain
Screwed head, Red eyes is all that now remains

Copyright Â© Harsh ... [ 2010-03-10 22:51:40]
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Re: Screwed head, Red eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by fadingaway on Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:59:15 PM AEST
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This is a very moving write. I like the "there is fire in the rain" Beautiful use of words.
"Screwed head, Red eyes is all that now remains"
In this I can relate.
There is fire in you words. Leaving me wanting more.
Great Job. Looking forward to more great writes.
mj

Re: Screwed head, Red eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 05:32:48 PM AEST
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I love they way you use your words in this, welcome to this site, awsome write, I felt the sorrow, Screwed head, red eyes is all that remains. Beautiful
SP (longhaircg)

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