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Pointless
Contributed by
blackbearextraordinaire
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Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:36:51 PM in AEST
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The world will keep spinning even after I'm gone
For the game doesn't end for the loss of a pawn
The sun will still rise when i'm not here
And so will every last person i hold dear.
Nothing will change for a lack of me
I don't know why i even bothered to be
No one hears the words I bother to say
For the day that i die will be just another day
Why am i so pointless?
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Re: Pointless
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by fadingaway on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:49:28 PM AEST
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this is very sad. I can feel the pain in the words.
Kings and pawns in the game of life.
good write. |
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Re: Pointless
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:51:07 PM AEST
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| For the game doesnt end for the loss of a pawn.......very strong and sad write highlighting fears of relevance in life self doubt and especially not being heard, no voice, |
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Re: Pointless
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by Inchiostro on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 11:36:03 PM AEST
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| really really good flow i love reading a poems like this, its almost like you know the next word before you read it so good. thanks for that and CHEER UP i hear you. :) |
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