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Remember The Time
Contributed by
DoubleS
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 07:20:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I come to a time
When my minds out of place,
I see a new world
As my mind is in space.
I look at your face
Run my hand through your hair,
Then I reminisce
The memories we share.
You remember the date
And time we first met,
I looked at your eyes
Not knowing what I'd get.
I'm holding in my arms
The love of my life,
I wouldn't let you go
Not without a fight.
I love you so much
As I still reminisce,
I go back to the time
Of true loves first kiss.
I looked in your eyes
And fell deeply in love,
I thought I was flying
As well as a dove.
The moment that we kissed
I knew what to do,
Do you remember the time
That you said I do.
It was sunny outside
We went to the park,
We stayed until seven
It was just after dark.
I wanted you to stop
To just look at me,
To look in my eyes
As I got on one knee.
I told you this story
And pull out a ring
You looked down and you said
So when's the wedding.
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DoubleS
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2010-03-10 19:20:34]
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Re: Remember The Time
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:55:52 PM AEST
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| I'm holding in my arms the love of my life......that line is worth more than gold and so is a heart who can love like this beautiful write |
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Re: Remember The Time
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 03:47:48 PM AEST
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Very romantic. This is a beautiful love story, filled with all the delicate nuances that a heart craves. Just lovely.
Seléne ~ |
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