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A grain so clean
Contributed by
fadingaway
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 02:43:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The sun has betrayed me
The moon has abandoned me
I'm sleeping in the cold
Everyday becoming older
Do you have something else to dump on my pain?
Or will you leave me to the silence again?
Was everything a lie?
Why couldn't I walk away?
I was condemned the day I stayed.
Will these lies disrupt the silence?
Will our love stop the violence?
What does it take just to get by?
I follow the blond that turns to brown.
The swirl around a knot is found
Where the grains merge
To form a sound
A shell so clean that must be found
The core of my pain, the tears become rain.
It all seems like yesterday
It's dead, and wilting to my dismay.
Every flower that bloomed has died.
Slowly tearing the grain inside.
What do I do with what's about to come?
Now that you know I'm almost done.
What do we do when the grains break to?
Do we throw it out and start anew?
Just to maintain loves violence?
We'll follow the grain from blond to brown.
Just for what we know is found.
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Re: A grain so clean
(User Rating: 1 )
by Inchiostro on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 06:05:48 PM AEST
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Solid
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For flow
But could you indulge my ignorance and tell me what exactly the message is in this poem? |
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Re: A grain so clean
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by Inchiostro on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:57:42 PM AEST
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| ahhhh i wish i could re rate it to a five!!! after what you said i see and understand and its very moving, what a terrible thing to have happen, i feel for you. |
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