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~Oh Lover~
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 11:04:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our reflections rippled softly
within the misty dew.
Lost inside your eyes,
I knew just what to do.
The summer wind it whispered
and I felt the want within.
The storm brought forth soft senses
lustful sighs soon to begin.
We melted in each others arms
loving the world away.
Rain swirling round us in currents
We kissed the moments away.
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shelby
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2010-03-08 23:04:54]
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Re: ~Oh Lover~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 11:22:18 PM AEST
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Yeah, that's the stuff.  |
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Re: ~Oh Lover~
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by Inchiostro on
Tuesday, 9th March 2010 @ 12:37:18 AM AEST
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I remember days when i felt like that with her.
Her skin so smooth and lips so sweet
She was the temptress that broke me
Ooooo there is a poem in there somewhere Ima go write it
Thanks for the inspiration and great piece keep writing |
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Re: ~Oh Lover~
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 9th March 2010 @ 06:56:04 AM AEST
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very nice write, very well written.
enjoyed this.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: ~Oh Lover~
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by voyage on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 04:17:05 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed it very much, simple and gentle. |
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