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Devil in the mirror
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 02:23:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Devil, in the mirror .sunken eyes,you i despise
for, want and greed,pleasure is all yours,take
my pain,.wrap me in chains,love my sin,crawl
over my skin,no guilt you feel,mercy not yours
to give,Deal me a card,hand of sin,Burn my
soul,Wretched beast,never full,my very being
your feast,pain you deal,with each hand,you
Throw the dice,numbers i feared,Take me down
Now i pay for my sin
My pain now you win
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Fuzzy
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2010-03-08 14:23:59]
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Re: Devil in the mirror
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by northernlights on
Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 10:47:09 PM AEST
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| Wretched beast never full my very being your feast......all consuming self destruction,powerful expressive write expressing the struggle |
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Re: Devil in the mirror
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 02:16:43 PM AEST
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A great description of the war within ones self. Dark, imaginative and well written.
take care
duff |
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Re: Devil in the mirror
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 07:48:07 AM AEST
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Dark, hellish, SUPERB!!!!
Nice one Fuzzy, this was a great read x
Star x x x |
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