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Through the Eyes of a Boy
Contributed by
bryanr
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Sunday, 7th March 2010 @ 03:25:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Remembering when we cared not a bit
for when you are young you simply can't sit
To run and to shout is simply the way
for a boy of your age to enjoy the day
You work and get wed, a family to raise
with children you're proud and full of praise
Your life has kept moving, but you still haven't seen
the days passing by and the life that has been
So now older and wiser, with grandchildren too
your life far behind you, but so much is new
You turn to your children to warn them of why
forgetting their childhood, means life passes by
There's only one life on this world to enjoy
go through it with joy, see through eyes of a boy
Don't wallow and wait for the good times to come
theres only one chance, don't ignore it, have fun!
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Re: Through the Eyes of a Boy
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 7th March 2010 @ 10:54:42 PM AEST
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| Remembering when we cared not a bit.... I like this as you remind of the essence of life that is so often forgotten with all that is dealt with in life, and also the importance of a child having a good childhood so they can remember this in later life.... see through eyes of a boy....don't ignore it have fun, warm poem that encourages the freedom of a spirit of fun |
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Re: Through the Eyes of a Boy
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 03:27:40 AM AEST
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enjoyed this write well written.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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