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murderer
Contributed by
dezurayp
on
Friday, 5th March 2010 @ 07:42:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I stare at the wall trying not to face
My fears but when I turn around there
It is the one thing that sucks the light out of me
and leaves the empty darkness takes my heart
and fills it with this blood sucking vinum called words it takes my mind
and fills it with evil thoughts but suddenly I came back to reality
and the thing that was killing me was myself
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2010-03-05 19:42:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: murderer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mars on
Saturday, 6th March 2010 @ 07:54:02 AM AEST (User
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Nice, and I have to say the way it runs together in my head is perfect for the tone of your writing. Nice use of the word 'and.' I liked it. |
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