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Smudges on an Eraser
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 5th March 2010 @ 06:08:00 PM in AEST
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Visible mistakes
representing
spontaneous thought,
tainting purity's innocence;
war stains of the soul
lingering
as reminders of imperfection
charcoal-hued blood of inspiration
staining a poet's useless tool--erasing
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lesoleilnoire
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2010-03-05 18:08:00]
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Re: Smudges on an Eraser
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by Mars on
Saturday, 6th March 2010 @ 07:57:36 AM AEST
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I think this well embodies what has been constraining my writing for so long (and still is). Perhaps it is because one can find difficulty in accepting what comes to them as they write? My best poetry (or so I've been told 'best') are those that seem to write themselves.
Perhaps taming a passion can only harm it.
Regardless, your write was more than worthy of it's purpose. |
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Re: Smudges on an Eraser
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th March 2010 @ 12:42:48 PM AEST
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A very interesting write. I think each writer has there own methods and style to laying down a write that says I feel good about this where as when you try too hard it leaves you saying this utter garbage. I really enjoyed this. Well written.
take care
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