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The Knife
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The Knife
I知 wounded, your knife has pierced my heart,
I知 broken and falling apart.
The blade is sharp and I feel its pain.
Deeper it pushes for further gain.
I wipe the tears as they start to flow,
Trying to hold on, the further you go.
I知 trembling and I知 full of fear,
And from your face not even a tear.
Each inch you push into my heart,
Will never allow it to restart.
Without remorse you stand by,
As slowly you watch me start to die.
I知 wounded, your knife went right through me,
The knife are your words, can稚 you see.
Copyright ﾂｩ
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2003-04-11 22:25:00]
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Re: The Knife
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:39:13 PM AEST
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well written but so sad. Hope things work out for you!!
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Re: The Knife
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 10:16:07 AM AEST
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| it was good, so much emotion, i cant wait to read more of ur poems ~Apryl |
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Re: The Knife
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 09:20:43 PM AEST
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wow great poem, i enjoyed it very much, but it was really sad...:O( cheer up...
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Re: The Knife
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 03:24:38 PM AEST
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excellent poem but ooooh so sad.......
hugs nessa |
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Re: The Knife
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by Jilli_bean on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 06:52:56 PM AEST
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| I really liked the symbolizum in your poem...it goes with that old saying sticks and stones may break my bones...but words will hurt me more...you know...good job...i liked it |
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