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i look alive but from the inside i have already died
Contributed by
hetlerkh
on
Friday, 5th March 2010 @ 05:46:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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hard to know that the love is only from your side
to know that the person u love didn't yet see u
didn't to think of u decide
to look at your collapsing dreams
where u stand without your all time dream's bride
this aint only leaving a wound
which u can do to your self outside
this wound can heel
but another wound deep inside
not only hurts more but could be even skies wide
each time she tells me about her new love
a tear rolls down ma face n slide
ma tears crash around me
ma heart burns out n gets fried
each time i try to tell ya how much i love u
u turn me down u get me denied
that way u keep breaking ma heart
that way u break it apart n it divide
each time i thought of hope to be with u
energy to ma soul n self this little thought did provide
when i see u with someone else
i stand aside
u have no idea how i cried
have tears like in everywhere
ma tears together collide
stop doing this to me
u make me lose ma pride
don't tell me i have not tried
i tried but just cant make her love me
am just so damn tied
the truth is harmful
but from it i cant hide
i cant lie to ma self anymore
like I've always did n lied
i look alive but from the inside i have already died
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Re: i look alive but from the inside i have already died
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 6th March 2010 @ 06:59:29 AM AEST
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Heartfelt write
well written
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: i look alive but from the inside i have already died
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Saturday, 6th March 2010 @ 05:15:47 PM AEST
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Don't let another's actions control your life,
my friend. Stand tall, be yourself & good
things will come to you. Nobody can make
you less-than if you don't let them
Take care of yourself!
elle :) :) :) |
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