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too true

Contributed by rustygrl33 on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Not sure why- when i look into your eyes
All i can see- even when i just walk by
Do you hear those darn butterflies?
Pushing it away, plz dont make me cry
Love is not for me, mine'n'yours, cant be
'Told the Lord to send s'one
Said His will was the best
But didn't think He'd take it this fast
O baby, i thin you might hate me
My mouth, my fingers wrote
Closed in, o baby, love? is it true?
Your eyes say yes but your acts...
Say all otherwise, God could it be?
Just for looks we stay apart
If our destiny changes, will you go away?
Cant, no courage to tell you...
Your breathe, almost makes me cry
Been hurt before, plz not again
Too much deeper in, o baby, stop
But if you leave, it'll break
I just know, yes, o could it be true
O baby, me and you?
Maybe if so, my Lord will tell
Everyday is hard and admitting...
Never, you may never know
Is it ours? why or can your eyes lie?
Dont, not sure if i should find it
I cant feel your arms around me
Tight, so tight- then i open my eyes
You're no where in sight-nightmares
Do i tell you, do i dare?
Dont think i 'm good enuf
O baby, you're so still in the midst
I love you, not sure why
But i hope its all dream, i wanna live
Why is it just to begin
O baby, cant you make it end?

Copyright © rustygrl33 ... [ 2003-04-11 22:05:00]
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Re: too true (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:45:44 PM AEST
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nice write.
michelle

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