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Silent whispers
Contributed by
wordsy
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Silent whispers
Deep inside
Cast in darkness
Where I abide
Forgotten slumber
Insomnias’ lust
The ticking hours
In faithless trust
Caught in madness
Insanity’s trap
Lost in darkness
A blind mans’ rap
Unknown gestures
In failed attempts
Scarred in battle
Eternity’s’ limp
Begotten soul
In endless wonder
Blundered efforts
In useless plunder
Distant memories
All fade to blue
Desperate plead
For what is true
Always wondering
what to do
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2003-04-11 21:25:00]
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Re: Silent whispers
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:53:17 PM AEST
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I love this poem!!
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Re: Silent whispers
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 10:23:59 AM AEST
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A wonderful peice!
I liked this alot! Christina |
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Re: Silent whispers
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 04:43:12 AM AEST
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What a great piece of work. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Silent whispers
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:01:18 PM AEST
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| i think this is great, i like your concept here and it kept my interest all the way, great title too:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Silent whispers
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 08:18:04 AM AEST
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I think that this is a very good poem. i really enjoyed reading it.
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