|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
A Kiss Goodbye
Contributed by
Greenpostit
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 02:30:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
|
Of the many things I miss about her,
the one that comes most quickly to mind,
is the kiss she would blow to me
through the kitchen window,
as I left for work each morning.
Nowadays, leaving alone as I do,
knowing she’s not watching me,
I leave with the deepest sadness
that sets my mood for the entire day
and prevails until bedtime.
My last thought of the evening,
before I fall asleep,
is of a vacant kitchen window
and the absence of her face
peering into the morning, to deliver my last kiss.
Goodbye.
Copyright ©
Greenpostit
... [
2010-03-02 14:30:02] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A Kiss Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 05:20:35 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Realy sad but great writing.
Isn't it the little things we miss the most?
Keep writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
|
|
Re: A Kiss Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by iiloveyouxx19 on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 07:37:40 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
awe, very sad write, however i appreciate that you shared it because sometimes the little things make the biggest impact, especially in remembrance, Great write. Best of luck to you |
|
|
|