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Hurt and Confused

Contributed by Kissakatie on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 11:03:39 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I thought I could move on.
I thought I could let you go
I thought so many things
But now I just don’t know.
He came in to my life
Put a smile on my face
And love back in my heart
But how quickly, I was replaced.
Life is so confusing
Love is totally fake
It makes you feel amazing
Then causes your heart to break
I thought I was doing okay
With you in heaven but by my side
Then I met him and he made me laugh
Id forgot how I missed that high
He took your place in my bed
But never in my heart
Thoughts of him danced happily in my head
He said wed never part
I never thought Id open up again
My heart was sealed shut when you died
But he convinced me that it was safe
And to let go of my foolish pride
So I did, and I took a chance at love
And I felt the warmth of the sunshine’s rays
I let him into my heart and now its broken
Cause he left me anyway.

Copyright Â© Kissakatie ... [ 2010-03-02 11:03:39]
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Re: Hurt and Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 2nd March 2010 @ 06:34:21 PM AEST
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Woo sounds like you've been thru a lot.
Also he sounds like someone that has no heart or concience.
Like he poured vineger on an open wound.
Hang in there. Take care.
Realy good writing even tho it's sad. All I can say it's better that he did it now than later.
I can relate to his type of relationship.
Huggs, blessings, prayer,
emy

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