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Lonely Coast
Contributed by
ronald
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
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Wonders always happen,
In this place of haven,
It is a mystery,
That takes eternity,
Just to get an answer.
The newest brand of balm,
Its days are mostly calm,
Where darkness says goodbye,
To make broken hearts fly,
As high as an eagle.
Concrete forest always,
Give emptiness of days,
Tearing the ground apart,
Ev'ry beat of the heart,
Until hopelessness dawns.
But not so for this place,
Besiege souls with its grace,
With its arms wide open,
Curing all souls' poison,
Till radiance is ahead.
Like a river of peace,
Its flow will never cease,
Like a gift from above,
Something many will love,
If it is a fire.
This is a lonely coast,
A place unknown by most,
Concrete forest; distant,
Making this place silent,
Yet feel not an island.
Its intentions; revealed,
As lonely hearts are healed,
As hopelessness go part,
To give a brand new start,
The answer for prayers.
Copyright ©
ronald
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Re: Lonely Coast
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:03:25 AM AEST
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simply beautiful
michelle |
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Re: Lonely Coast
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 09:54:47 PM AEST
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| i love this, i want to go there too:) |
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Re: Lonely Coast
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by vydana on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 02:36:18 PM AEST
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| Of your poems I've read so far, this would be my favorite :) |
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Re: Lonely Coast
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by Qohinoor on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:25:46 AM AEST
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Yeah, good poem.
You can see its writeup in the Special Poetry Section of the Forums.
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Re: Lonely Coast
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by blueheart on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 11:17:51 PM AEST
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| Ronald, this is a beautiful poem. It certainly evokes a peaceful and calm feeling. It totally deserves to be in the Special Poems Section. Great job. Look forward to reading more of your work. :) |
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