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Addicted
Contributed by
Junkee
on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 07:27:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Addicted
Her breath, cryptic passion
From two fixated black spheres, fire light tears forge flight
Her campaign of flirtatious gestures, quite seductive
Holds confidence in false certainty
Evil little angel
Leaves all huffing, heaving, panting, expiring
Blood red halo, innocently in possession
Sin douses luminous nature
In comprehensions deserted trap, masked obscurity perches
Barbarically whispers
Cuddle the compulsion
Caress the fetish
Embrace the surrender
Cherish the enslavement
Her gaze, enticing wickedness
Eyes lurch back
Out of body ordeal
Eternally adrift
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Junkee
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2010-02-28 19:27:40]
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Re: Addicted
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by robsalinas on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 10:26:50 PM AEST
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your wording creates such vivid imagery, both dark and masterful
Very wordy, but i enjoyed it that way, keep writing
hope to see more!
i liked this bit right here, very well stated:
"Cuddle the compulsion
Caress the fetish
Embrace the surrender
Cherish the enslavement" |
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Re: Addicted
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 11:00:10 PM AEST
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| Evil little Angel.....all the power of dark feminine seduction,then the surrender of pure abandonment......out of body ordeal....powerfully descriptive,creating a femme fatale strong write |
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Re: Addicted
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 11:58:33 PM AEST
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For someone that don't know to read you are a great writer.
blessings.
emy |
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Re: Addicted
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by mysellf on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 01:00:26 PM AEST
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| Omg I love this poem, it seems so real, true. Well Done XD |
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