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Above In #18
Contributed by
dirk-velvet
on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 02:12:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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what could they be doing ?
the sound is
unfamiliar to me.
it is not of
feet dragging
or
a door slamming
or
a bed with two
moving about.
I know the sound of
a dropped pot
compared to
a dropped pan
a shoe
to a
book
a dog
a cat
a
child.
I can only surmise
him
with no legs
her
with no arms
trying to perform the
Tango.
Copyright ©
dirk-velvet
... [
2010-02-28 14:12:00]
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Re: Above In #18
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by spud on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 02:45:29 PM AEST
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Hi,
Nice one!
A new angle on 'things that go bump in the night!'
Tommy
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Re: Above In #18
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 04:10:31 PM AEST
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What a thought to ponder. ha. A very provocative write. And done so with perfect wording.
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Re: Above In #18
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st March 2010 @ 09:55:51 PM AEST
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