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The Killer
Contributed by
Greenpostit
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Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 10:30:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In the dark of the night, I awake,
To the creaking noise of the rusted gate,
Attached to the fence that surrounds my little house.
Someone’s coming who doesn’t belong,
Up the sidewalk and across the lawn,
Seeking cover in the shadows near my house.
He’s looking for a window that’s open a crack,
Thoroughly checking from front to back,
Trying to find a way inside my house.
He’s a criminal intent on committing a crime.
The target he’s chosen just happens to be mine,
He wants to steal the things that I have in my house.
He carries a knife which if forced to, he’ll use,
In a battle he doesn’t intend to lose,
With whomever he should encounter, living inside my house.
If only he knew that once inside,
There’ll be no place for him to hide,
From the cold blooded killer waiting for him in my house.
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Greenpostit
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2010-02-27 22:30:10]
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Re: The Killer
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th February 2010 @ 09:16:05 AM AEST
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A chilling tale of being
in the wrong place at the wrong time
by the end of this passage my blood had run cold
The image of a cold blooded killer lying and waiting
nicely done
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Re: The Killer
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by spud on
Monday, 1st March 2010 @ 02:27:00 AM AEST
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Hi,
Like it. Enter at your peril!!
Tommy
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