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A cry out to the world
Contributed by
takeahittariq
on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 02:21:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A cry out to the world.
Make the world, don’t let it make you.
I want to be these people
I’m not.
I want to be these things
I can’t be.
I’m looking for a change in person,
A new me.
But why don’t I find myself and be me for once.
I’ve got to love myself, and not this image I create.
Ok, so I’ve left the crowd - so is lonely being alone?
Or choosing to be alone?
I’ve made a choice because I think its right
But have I really made this choice,
Or just the world around me?
See the trouble is
I love this world but not myself.
Tears will fall from my eyes
But
The worlds not going to wipe them away.
Confused?
Because I am...
Blood stained the pen,
the paper,
the carpet,
the world.
He used to cry himself to sleep every night.
He used to cry out to the world...
But no one heard him.
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takeahittariq
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2010-02-27 14:21:29]
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Re: A cry out to the world
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 10:46:02 PM AEST
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| very interesting and intrigueing write. kept my attention throught the whole thing. and to answer your question..yes i'm confused...but thats ok because it works here..and i like it.;) |
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Re: A cry out to the world
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 11:24:26 PM AEST
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| Expressing the emotions of finding who you are in this world against the pressures of the world.....,make the world,don't let it make you......asking the questions surrounding self acceptance,and the hurt when there is none.....he used to cry himself to sleep,questions and emotions that need to be addressed especially for a sensitive soul well written |
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