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Stolen Luggage
Contributed by
Contralogicus
on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I lie in my bed, I am feeling quite oppressed,
Some heavy burdens found a perfect place to nest,
Every time I breathe, some pain within my chest,
Makes its presence known, does not let me rest.
And speaking to me, from the surrounding surreal darkness,
Are the penetrating and collective voices of men of greatness,
They are mocking me with their quick words, nothing less,
Than their brilliant rhetoric, orations, humor. Actor, actress,
That proudly speaks those things which I do not dare bless,
With spoken sounds but instead as simple thoughts remain,
Within my locked and secure mind, as I strategically detain,
Them, like the identity of a casual observer standing in the rain,
While I, all this time, some secret in an empty vessel contain.
And in the phone which hanging slightly off the hook,
Or on the floor, in the tattered pages of a used book,
I find some solace, broken comfort. And as I look,
Into this mirror I remember all those things she took.
Copyright ©
Contralogicus
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2003-04-11 16:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Stolen Luggage
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 04:54:12 PM AEST (User
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Great write....tho so very sad....
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Re: Stolen Luggage
(User Rating: 1 ) by boricuacd on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:04:14 PM AEST (User
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good job |
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Re: Stolen Luggage
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sk8er909 on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:06:06 PM AEST (User
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Good poem |
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Re: Stolen Luggage
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:13:51 AM AEST (User
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This is great!!
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Re: Stolen Luggage
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 11:29:18 AM AEST (User
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Voytek I am impressed, as always. |
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Re: Stolen Luggage
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 11:41:58 PM AEST (User
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Wow .. brilliant ... |
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