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Reliving the Moment
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
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Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 10:21:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I yearn with all my heart that I could go back and undo
Relive that one moment and take back what I did to you
Just to say I am sorry doesn't fix your broken heart
I dream of reliving that moment, from the very start.
I wish that I could somehow make a difference
That I could relive this life and try to understand
What it means to live life to the very fullest
And soar through life with someone hand in hand.
I wonder if I could save this world some grief
If I could relive that moment before the war
Save the lives of countless soldiers, again and again
Mothers and wives wouldn't need to cry anymore.
If I could relive that moment, Friday of last week
When I told him I didn't have anything to spare
Just far too many homeless people out there
For most of this world to even begin to care.
If I could relive the moment when she was born
And hold her close to me and never ever let go
That was the happiest day I have ever had in my life
And I regret wih all my heart the day I let her go.
If I could relive all these moments of time
Perhaps this world would be a better place
But we are all her with decisions we've made
All that we have left are our dreams to chase.
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2010-02-24 10:21:48]
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Re: Reliving the Moment
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by DarkWolf on
Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 10:25:10 AM AEST
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| it sounds as if you are writing to someone you love |
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Re: Reliving the Moment
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by Xaven on
Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 10:06:06 PM AEST
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Very well written, I really liked it a lot,the way you put different kind of examples that could turn out to be the biggest mistake of someone in this world, and how you place yourself in that situation, and express how much you'd want to "Relieve the moment"
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