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Loving You
Contributed by
DarkWolf
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Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 08:45:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My love for you,
is undying and true,
all I want is to be with you.
To the end of the world I would walk,
just to hear that sweet voice talk.
For as long as the moon is in the sky,
for you I would lovingly die.
Even if I was nailed to a tree,
that would not be enough to keep me from thee.
Even if my body was full of pain,
with the thought of you I would never go insane.
Without you I can't live,
to be with you my very soul I would give.
You have the beauty of a magnificent red rose,
and in the light it even brightly shows.
No matter what you say,
my love for you will allways stay.
As I lay my head to sleep,
I think about you and start to weep
Copyright ©
DarkWolf
... [
2010-02-24 08:45:27]
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Re: Loving You
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 10:23:51 AM AEST
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Love is such a powerful emotion.
It is hard to explain it in just words,
but I think you did a good job of
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Re: Loving You
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by Anu on
Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 03:31:38 PM AEST
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Every word dipped in love,
made this poem enchanted and spellbound..! :)
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Re: Loving You
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by thistle_and_fern on
Monday, 1st March 2010 @ 09:51:57 AM AEST
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True it is better than my "My Love". lol.
A very romantic, from the heart poem. To find a love like this is a blessing and a gift.
Enjoy the moments, because it is these moments that make our life worth while.
"...for you i would lovingly die",
that is unconditional, everlasting love. For my love I wouldve gladly taken his place in death so he could live.
Loved your poem. |
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