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epiphany in a small town
Contributed by
wil_ca
on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i look out the window
and see every rain drop hit the ground
thats when i realize that im alone once again
and not one thought leaves, they flow right through the tip of this pen
they keep whirling around in my head
every argument, every word that you ever said
its the middle of the night
and ive been up since the begining
scribbling these broken thoughts and suggestions down
like theres no ending
mixed emotions....missed opportunities
this all feels like a dream......
a memory or something in between
constantly wondering what it would be like
to be next to you at your side
Copyright ©
wil_ca
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2003-04-11 16:05:00]
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Re: epiphany in a small town
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by boricuacd on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:05:22 PM AEST
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| good job |
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Re: epiphany in a small town
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by Dot on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:35:01 PM AEST
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| Sad, melancholy. Very good. Dot |
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Re: epiphany in a small town
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:16:31 AM AEST
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flowing words. Well done
Michelle |
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Re: epiphany in a small town
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 12:58:11 AM AEST
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| your lovely write gives me such a wistful feeling... hugs nessa |
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