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The lie Hurt the Most
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 01:48:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Still hear your words,"i love you my sweet Paul" never
will another be,remember the last the words you did
speak, NO! I'll not repeat,fresh start you said for the
love that you held,"don't ever leave me", i never did
go freely away, no other my love could i give with
open arms you welcomed me, then held me
so close, Kiss so sweet,"missed you my Paul"
you told me when we did meet, so lovely and
happy you looked,that beautiful smile your
eyes I'll never forget, the words you said as
you touched my face,"miss my ring" then
looked at your hand,Ring i will replace.
~The lie hurt the Most~
Just 36 hours and all did change, again i
could tell you wanted me away,my love
just wanted to stay,words you said NO!
I'll not repeat,but i remember your first
when we did meet,now another the same
you repeat, "I'll love you forever" yes and
this love is true,as you repeat to him now
"no one can ever take your place" as many
times you said to me,so what hurt the most
well i guess i have to say was the lie, strange
my love will always be,as for these words
i spoke,"no one can ever take your place"
for me, my words where True and remain.
~The lie hurt the Most~
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Fuzzy
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Re: The lie Hurt the Most
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 11:29:34 AM AEST
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Things are always perfect in the salad days. Promises are forever that are indestructible and then like a freak accident everything changes. One remains true while the other strays. This was well written.
take care
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Re: The lie Hurt the Most
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by thistle_and_fern on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 03:13:30 PM AEST
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Can feel the hurt, the disappointment, and the disillusion in your poem.
Heartbreaking words but so very well orchestrated.
Just hope in time the hurt heals.
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Re: The lie Hurt the Most
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by JakerBaker88 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 10:50:56 AM AEST
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| The way you composed this poem helped express your frenzied feelings. I too have felt this confused, hurt, and stunned by someone else's actions. I hope you do find your happy ending eventually. Take care. |
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