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My furry friend
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
on
Monday, 22nd February 2010 @ 10:45:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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Furry, purry cuddly cat,
Sitting on the big red mat,
Looks at me with big green eyes,
I look back in great surprise.
Stalking, walking , creeping cat,
Thinks my finger is a rat,
As I move it here and there,
She hides behind the comfy chair.
Slowly, slowly here she creeps,
I pretend to be asleep,
Coming closer, nearer still,
Getting ready for the kill.
Scratchy, catchy, running fast,
Bites my finger, then runs past,
Over couches chairs and me,
Stops and scratches at a flea.
Tired now, my friend and me,
Curl up together on mums knee,
Snuggle now all nice and sweet,
Quiet now, we're fast asleep.
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Re: My furry friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Monday, 22nd February 2010 @ 11:02:19 PM AEST (User
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awwww what a lovely poem very descriptive very homely well written |
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Re: My furry friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 12:02:47 AM AEST (User
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lol...love it!!!!
Tim
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Re: My furry friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 12:07:49 AM AEST (User
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This is excellent. It flows nicely from line to line. Enjoyed it. |
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Re: My furry friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 01:52:11 AM AEST (User
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Really enjoyed this,yep that's a Cat for sure.
very nice write
Take care
Fuzzy |
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