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ALWAYS
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Monday, 22nd February 2010 @ 09:58:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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It's said that its better to have loved and loss,
then never to love at all
I believe I have loved and loss, but not to morn,
Instead of torn, I have been reborn,
with the knowedge of knowing what it felt like,
so I will not try to forget the love I lost,
even though the cost of my broken heart,
I know now what it feels like,
what the kiss taste like,
how the arms so warm that embraced me,
it encased me, with total bliss.
Oh yes, I do really miss that feeling of love,
and I will remember it always, as a good thing,
a wonderful feeling, a way of being.
Knowing, I will probably never taste your kiss again,
it still remains in my heart forever,
I will now open my heart and my life for love to come in,
I dont know where it will come from but I know as long as
my heart is open, love will enter once again.
I finally except this love is loss,
but a new one is waitng somewhere to begin.
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longhaircg
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Re: ALWAYS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd February 2010 @ 07:39:53 PM AEST
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This was great. You summed this up so well. Hurting, wondering if you will ever have that feeling of love again knowing that it could be there tomorrow or it could be years. But to find it you can't give up or you will never have it again. Great write.
take care
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Re: ALWAYS
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 09:10:19 AM AEST
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Such a beautifully writtten poem, and you are right in thinking that love will come again.....
With open heart and mind, everything is possible x
I really enjoyed this piece very much, and wish you well....
Star x x x
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Re: ALWAYS
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 26th February 2010 @ 06:22:35 AM AEST
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A lovely write, what you say is very true
although sometimes difficult to
accept love gone, but looks
like your heart is open.
And that's that's good,
hope you find a new.
nice write enjoyed the read
Take care
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