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Betrayal
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
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Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 03:27:45 PM in AEST
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Betrayal
This feeling of betrayal,
Infects my entire self,
You, the betrayers, are in denial.
You hurt me dearly,
You’ve lied to me,
You made me unable to see clearly.
I thought she was my friend,
And thought he was my lover,
I was entirely wrong in the end.
You both have stabbed my heart,
I’ve become numb,
I don’t know who left the bigger mark.
You shove it in my face,
All that betrayal,
No, we will never be the same.
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2010-02-21 15:27:45]
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Re: Betrayal
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 04:49:40 PM AEST
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Powerful write.
I can feel the surge of emotion that must have coursed through you as you wrote this.
Hope your pain subsides.
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Re: Betrayal
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by Rykor on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 05:14:57 PM AEST
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| I feel sorry for the pain you're going through. You were able to make me feel some of your emotions in this nicely wrote poem. |
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