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The haunted moor
Contributed by
ravi
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Long ago,among an era of strange likings,
among the harsh,mighty Vikings,
there lived a girl so cozy,
they called her little Lucie
Her golden locks on a face so cute,
such as to make the hardest play a flute.
her mesmerizing laughter so infectious,
the greatest of plays turn fictitious.
her voice delicate like the fresh dew,
the sweetest of birds seem to mew.
In a lonely wild moor,she used to play,
with the harshest of mortals in her sway.
Strange are the vagrant breezes
of mighty fate,
to strike the little one at her own gate.
A violent illness took it's toil,
disintegrating her into a paper foil.
Still now,after many brews of strong ales,
the wild ,forsaken moor tells it's hidden tales.
The bravest feel daunted,
they say the moor is haunted.
Copyright ©
ravi
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2003-04-11 13:35:00]
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Re: The haunted moor
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by cant-skate on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 01:42:25 PM AEST
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| so beautifully written!ans sad...LOVED IT! |
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Re: The haunted moor
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:33:29 AM AEST
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such images!! Well done
Michelle |
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Re: The haunted moor
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by venkat on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:40:11 AM AEST
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| well done.. venkat |
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Re: The haunted moor
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:33:08 AM AEST
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most vividly excellent!
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