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The seed
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 04:41:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Taking a first step on to a new begining,
the clouds disapear, casting out my fears,
listening to the wind blow, gentally tickles my ears.
squint for the bright light, cast its warm blaze,
spring is near, new beginings stirring, its finally clear.
Melting the ice, of this heart of mine, ready to bloom,
peaking out of this shell, walk away from this hell,
Past is past you can never go back,
spring has sprung, this old coat I have hung,
shed this skin Ive been living in,
Now I must let go, for a seed to grow.
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2010-02-20 16:41:26]
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Re: The seed
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by deadwriter on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 06:45:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece. Very positive outlook. One step at a time, but continually stepping forward.
You WILL succeed!!
Deadwriter
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Re: The seed
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 11:20:30 PM AEST
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| lovely feel to this poem, get a sense of healing as leaving past behind to move on if somewhat cautiously.....peaking out of this shell.....inspiring and positive well written |
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