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Insomnia
Contributed by
Dabomble
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Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 02:59:41 PM in AEST
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oops
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Perception?
define
Inspection?
refine
definite yet incomplete
like sand that never dies
will always fall beneath your feet
yet never crawl from your eye
sleep
still forever with dreamy motion
forever still?
questionable notion
back, forward, side to side
fall to sleep before i die
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2010-02-20 14:59:41]
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Re: Insomnia
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by Xaven on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 10:41:15 PM AEST
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| Very nice, I like the way it's easy to read, and how you describe the moment while you can't sleep. Very well elaborated. :) |
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Re: Insomnia
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by Capian on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 03:14:50 AM AEST
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| Very nice write. Look forward to reading more |
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