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Trapped
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 11:49:40 AM in AEST
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Trapped inside a net,
tiny windows torture me,
freedom's tempting view
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-02-20 11:49:40]
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Re: Trapped
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by deadwriter on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 06:58:19 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. Excellent write.
Hope you are doing well.
Deadwriter
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Re: Trapped
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by ChaosFactor on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 09:27:29 PM AEST
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| This is excellent in its brevity. Relatable sentiment. |
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Re: Trapped
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 11:28:00 PM AEST
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| Being trapped perfectly captured....freedom's tempting view.... well written |
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Re: Trapped
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by spud on
Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 05:42:35 AM AEST
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Hi,
As usual, you hit the subject matter with the
briefest of ease. Well said!
Tommy
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