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Driving Home
Contributed by
skinny-little-punk
on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 09:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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At dusk I am in the passenger seat of your car
And you lean against the door, light a cigarette.
The sun is orange, slipping
And it must be in your eyes.
Will you stay?
Will I stay?
Will we not fall apart like sheathes of wet paper
Will we not come apart like everything else?
You move in the summer air
And I breathe in as you exhale,
Perfect against a concrete landscape,
Perfect against a dusty sky.
You are in my veins,
Better than any drug.
You are in my mind, my nervous mind,
Comforting it out of its coma.
You flow through me lighter than gravity
But I can’t hold on tight enough
And I’m scared that you will slip.
I am not whole but I hope some day to be;
You help fill up the cracks in my soul.
Copyright ©
skinny-little-punk
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2002-08-01 21:29:59]
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Re: Driving Home
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 10:31:58 PM AEST
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well what a wonderful start to your Love poetry theme then. This was excellant. Funny how love makes us do things we never imagined we could, isnt it.
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Re: Driving Home
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 01:20:03 PM AEST
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This was beautiful! Thanks for sharing... it's wonderful how love makes us look at things isn't it?
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Re: Driving Home
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 09:01:36 AM AEST
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I just love this Josh...this is inspired and I'm looking forward to reading more that I'm sure will flow from your pen now that you have found real love.
Chrissie x |
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Re: Driving Home
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by Clarity on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 03:28:12 AM AEST
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beautiful poem...i'm so happy for you!
this is my favorite poem u've written and i'm looking forward to more.
jen |
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