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Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Thursday, 18th February 2010 @ 09:29:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The tears turn into the salt,
And the blood into the water
Cold and sparkle snowflakes
Covered my veins inside.
Cos we're like the ships under the moonlight,
Floating so slowly onto ocean smooth surface
Always looking for some answers
But we don't even see we got them inside.

So let's crawl onto the ocean surface
Until we can find our place to be
Let's give ourselves away to the waves
Until we'll have the strengths to live
And let's float as long as we can take a breath
Back to love we've once left in the past.

I know, no one is really perfect
We've already made our mistakes
So it's about time to come back
And put the things on their own places,
Maybe, with new page, maybe not at all
But we keep on floating, we crawl
As the hands under the watches glass
So it must be meaning we're not so hopeless

So let's crawl onto the ocean surface
Until we can find our place to be
Let's give ourselves away to the waves
Until we'll have the strengths to live
And let's float as long as we can take a breath
Back to love we've once left in the past.

Yes, fables don't always have a happy ending
But we need them quite as before, don't we?
Although we're just the ships, so lonely ones
But we still have a hope on the second chance.

So let's crawl onto the ocean surface
Until we can find our place to be
Let's give ourselves away to the waves
Until we'll have the strengths to live
And let's float as long as we can take a breath
Back to love we've once left in the past.

Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2010-02-18 09:29:45]
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