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I wish I were, away, away
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
on
Wednesday, 17th February 2010 @ 08:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wish I were, away, away
I wish I were a butterfly,
I could fly with the turbulent wind,
Away, away,
So dainty and beautiful,
Envied by all.
I wish I were a fish,
I could swim in the vast sea,
Away, away,
So sleek and colorful,
Envied by all.
I wish I were a bear,
I could roam the forest free,
Away, away,
So large and strong,
Envied by all.
I wish I were a lion,
I could run the prairie distance,
Away, away,
So agile and quick,
Envied by all.
I wish I were a cloud,
I could soar the sky unbothered,
Away, away,
So light and feathery,
Envied by all.
I wish I weren’t me,
For I can only live life sadly,
Away, away,
So sad and lonely,
Forgotten by all.
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Re: I wish I were, away, away
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by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 17th February 2010 @ 11:59:34 PM AEST
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| Good stuff. I thought the end paragraph made the poem. Excellent. |
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Re: I wish I were, away, away
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by jdwright on
Thursday, 18th February 2010 @ 01:58:29 PM AEST
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| I really liked this thank you |
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Re: I wish I were, away, away
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 18th February 2010 @ 05:48:42 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the write. Great contrast at the end to give it that twist. Thank you for sharing.
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