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Heartache
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
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Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 12:11:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm sitting in the pouring rain,
My broken heart is causing pain.
I want to run so far away,
But here I am, I have to stay.
I need some wings so I can fly,
But here I sit, I stare, I cry.
When will this dark mood ever end,
When will my poor heart ever mend.
And will the sun come out for me,
To warm my heart and set me free.
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Re: Heartache
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by purplestary on
Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 10:43:14 PM AEST
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| awsome write. brilliant depiction of heartache. it flows so well and this pain is so relatable. awsome. |
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Re: Heartache
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 19th February 2010 @ 04:40:37 AM AEST
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The heart binds emotions and we are slave to it.
We can only be set free when it chooses, but it does choose !!
Steve |
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