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hopeless
Contributed by
hotindia
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i woke up one morning happy witha smile
only to find out the one i love abd care for
got up and left me with out a word why
i gave her all i had in me that one can give
i gave her love respect cared for her tenderly
why dose love have to hurt so much when you try your best and the one you love just leave you that alone not knowing why she left love should be a happy emotion not a sad one i dont know if i could love again i dont whatto go through this pain again
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Re: hopeless
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:44:26 AM AEST
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you expressed your feeling well.Great write. Look forward to happier days they will come.
Michelle |
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Re: hopeless
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by Cutey on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 10:57:08 PM AEST
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Hi there Hotindian .
i'm truly sorry what has happen to you and your dream you thought that would be fine i can see and feel the pain i know it all to well my self you knoww well look to the brite side she was not all real in what she said to you there is better out there that would treat you better some day you will find |
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