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Given Another Try

Contributed by Pomazey864 on Friday, 12th February 2010 @ 07:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If any of this poem is used, please give credit to me, Corey, the author.

Title: Given Another Try

A first Love in Life, Everyone has one
Letting it go, of course, is harder said than done.
You Stand Alone, feeling trapped like a Ghost in a Shell
Trying to escape, the complex thoughts and emotions that dwell.
You cry all day, as if trying to flood the streets of town
Doing your best to talk, to your best friends who will never let you down.
But as I look on, and find the weakness in this tragedy
I gather many thoughts, to use my strength in a strategy.
From any angle of the situation, I feel completely empowered
Fighting a war within myself, to not turn into a coward.
I will always be there for you, with never ending love to dispurse
Even if I’m on the other side, of an alternate Universe.
With this build up of pure energy, pouring from my untamed heart
There is nothing… That will ever tear us apart.
If anyone ever tries to harm you, they will have to pay the price
Giving them a whole lot more, than just a word of advice.
What I see in you and the many things you do, has me completely amazed,
Plus how gorgeous you are, makes me completely dazed.
I will take the time to gather thoughts and emotions from within
For you, my heart I will surrender, A love to begin.

Copyright Â© Pomazey864 ... [ 2010-02-12 19:05:49]
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Re: Given Another Try (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Saturday, 13th February 2010 @ 10:18:20 AM AEST
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I love your strength in this writing, pure determination,
SP

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