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My Friend my Fear my Fault
Contributed by
SilentMuse
on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 07:47:50 PM in AEST
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Never before have I wanted death more
so I return once again to knock on deaths door
his knocker is a heart, his door, a chest
on the chest is a dagger, on which his heart rest
I wait, silent, my hope mixed with fear
he comes to the door, I can tell that he's near
carefully I take my final breath in
as he wispers in my ear
this is the unforgivable sin
with this warning the door opens
he extends his hand
take it, his silent, and final comand
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Re: My Friend my Fear my Fault
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 08:17:26 PM AEST
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| I am actually feeling the same way right now. All I can say is this is an awesome write |
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Re: My Friend my Fear my Fault
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by ChaosFactor on
Sunday, 14th February 2010 @ 05:39:52 AM AEST
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This is incredible doll. As always.
I love you. Take care. |
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