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The Man on the Other Side
Contributed by
Rykor
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Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 12:16:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see the man on the other side
Of this watery portal.
He looks exactly like me,
But we are not the same person,
For my life is full of troubles,
While his is full of pleasures.
I try to reach out to him,
Only to get a cold, wet reminder
Of reality.
Copyright ©
Rykor
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2010-02-06 12:16:35]
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Re: The Man on the Other Side
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 01:15:44 PM AEST
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very thought provoking, like the
man in the mirror.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: The Man on the Other Side
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by manbeast on
Wednesday, 10th February 2010 @ 07:00:50 AM AEST
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liked it a lot.
made me want to jump in.
I like poetry that puts a picture to our feelings the way this one did. |
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