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Sugar Coated Pins and Needles
Contributed by
Cayleigh-Chan
on
Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 10:22:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I’m tired of your sugar coated nasty lies.
Always right,
Even when you're wrong.
It makes me want to pull out my hair.
-One strand at a time!-
I hope you know...
I can see under that clever disguise.
You put on a great show,
Little angelic demon.
Guilty, Guilty!
Call the judge...
But of course, all I do is smile and nod.
Copyright ©
Cayleigh-Chan
... [
2010-02-06 10:22:29]
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Re: Sugar Coated Pins and Needles
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 10:36:29 AM AEST
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nice write.
I hope you know...
I can see under that clever disguise.
You put on a great show,
Little angelic demon.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Sugar Coated Pins and Needles
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by Rykor on
Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 12:18:46 PM AEST
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| Wonderful choice of words! I like it |
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Re: Sugar Coated Pins and Needles
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 10:44:34 AM AEST
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| nice write. i really enjoyed this. alot of people can relate to this, but not many can put it in to words so well. i realy enjoyed the the way you ended it..very catchy.."guilty guilty! call the judge...but of course all i do is smile and nod." |
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