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Winged Beings Inside Me
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 07:41:43 PM in AEST
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Iridescent wings pulsate to the wind's beat;
the butterfly inside of me flutters to be free.
Glossy blue fairies dance in the moonlight;
the winged soul in my heart is confined by its art.
Translucent dragonflies hover over the wetlands;
in my dream a fire-breathing dragon burns itself free.
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lesoleilnoire
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2010-02-05 19:41:43]
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Re: Winged Beings Inside Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 10:40:26 PM AEST
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Very vivid and colourful image. Beautiful. Powerful. And oh, so enchantingly curious. The dragon seems out of place. The beast within? :) Wonderful writing.
Seléne ~ |
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Re: Winged Beings Inside Me
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by northernlights on
Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 11:13:02 PM AEST
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| So much movement and imagination in this and when thought of as inside you creates the heightened awareness of excitement well written |
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Re: Winged Beings Inside Me
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 05:06:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful.,intriguing write enjoyed this.
Take care
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