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A BIttersweet Departure
Contributed by
xnickix7
on
Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 04:44:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Through the bars I sit and stare
Confined in this tiny square
This prison got the best of me
My life will end so I forsee
For out escapes a hopeless sigh
I start to cough my throat so dry
I sit my knees pulled to my chest
This is all so hard to digest
When did this all become so hard
To where I am forever scarred
I feel the pressure in my head
Inside it echoes what was said
My time to leave is coming near
It’s too foggy, nothing is clear
I eat what’s left of my last meal
I weep and to the ground I kneel
For what exactly do I pray?
It doesn’t matter what I say
I stand and at the bars I wait
Im hear to seal my final fate
The guards arrive my wrists they take
My final walk I start to make
The needle plunges deep in my vain
Oddly I smile, I like the pain
Sweet poison how I wait to meet
I start to seize strapped in this seat
My eyes roll back my breath now ceased
From all this pain I’m now released
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Re: A BIttersweet Departure
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 06:41:59 PM AEST
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Wow, this write is heart wrenching sad.
I'm at a loss for words.
Realy dramatic writing.
Awesome work.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: A BIttersweet Departure
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 05:11:38 AM AEST
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sent a shiver down my spine, well written
Take care
Fuzzy
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