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Edgar

Contributed by nena173838 on Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 04:38:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i know nothing of love so i cant say i love you .its impossible to say so, soo soon.
then again nothing is impossible unless u fail.
i feel something i cant describe,
something ive never felt or thought before
something i cant explain.
your eyes are outstanashing
your smile undescribable it really catches my soul and senses,
but everytime i see you my mind gets philisophical
i feel like theres something to be discover
something amazing just waiting for someone to umwrap it
I WANT TO UNWRAP the feeling or the attitude or the life
in you , its so mezmerizing , i just cant justly describe what you
cause me to feel its intreiging, its exciting, its emotional,its challenging just not to stare
at you, . so many thought or emotions come to me all at once and i
dont know how to handle them, but i must learn, i must ignore,
because i feel like a stalker with pics. of you
through myspace, i feel useless that i feel invisible to you, i feel like its IMPOSSIBLE to get
a smile ,word,or most importantly,attention or care from you.
i feel like crying everytime i see your eyes there soo significant to me
i could stare into them forever its like being trappped in a puzzling great beautyfull ocean
with calm waters controlled by the moonlight,so steady and calm in its mysterious ways.
but i musnt ,i shouldnt im just hurting my self, and
i will not hurt my self , i will move on.
and this a brief sentimental detail of how i felt the first time i saw you,
and still havent spoken a word to you a week later with the same or more intense
feeling. and yet theres a small insignificant spark of hope
to not be indiffrent to you.

by- CRYSTAL I.ROJAS

Copyright © nena173838 ... [ 2010-02-05 16:38:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Edgar (User Rating: 1 )
by catapult57 on Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 08:09:15 PM AEST
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I like the depth of emotions as you struggle between heart and head. I also like the simile of eyes and the ocean. Finally, the way you include the reference to myspace gave the poem a utter sense of realism

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