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Sweetheart...what did you do today?
Contributed by
delerioustearz
on
Thursday, 10th April 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Mom's dellusional
dysfunctional
She doesn't know me or what i do everyday.
But one day My mom will ask me...
"Sweeheart, what did you do today?"
I'll reply
"Well, I slit my wrists today."
But she'll slumber off, becoming sound asleep.
She'll pick me up from school at 2:30 but i can never count on it cuz she is always late.
Its quiet for a moment or two...
"Honey, what did you do today?"
Once again, I reply
"Hmmmm, I slit my wrists today."
But her eyes wander over the windshield not once looking at me...but at a nearby head on collision.
I call home saying i'm staying at a friends house...
"I dont care" she replies and hangs up the phone.
underneath my breath i mumble
"By the way, I slit my wrists today."
I'm in my bed....ready to let myself go.
I can see a new world clearly now.
Mom will notice (if she is up) that Im not up.
It might take her awhile.
But soon she'll open my door
And noice
I slit my wrists today.
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delerioustearz
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2003-04-10 23:05:00]
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Re: Sweetheart...what did you do today?
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:57:32 AM AEST
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| this hurts just to read... so sorry for your loss... |
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Re: Sweetheart...what did you do today?
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 03:26:30 PM AEST
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| oh...so sad...so true as well...i'm sorry... |
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Re: Sweetheart...what did you do today?
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by Gin on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:03:10 AM AEST
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so this is what my best friend would of felt like if I did commit suicide...this poem gave me chills...prolly becuz I can relate, a little bit too well. I'm sorry for your loss. But at least you made one girl come to her senses...that girl would be me. Keep writing and hang in there
~Gin~ |
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Re: Sweetheart...what did you do today?
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 05:24:28 AM AEST
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powerful write..oh so sad...unfortunately happens too often in todays society
Sharon |
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