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Who am I?
Contributed by
essential
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Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 06:17:39 AM in AEST
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I am just a shadow
Missing renown
I am like a meadow
That's always stamped down
I am just a grain
Of white beaches sand
I am like a cane
Stand straight by command
I am just a ghost
I can't be affected
Am transparent almost
And alway neglected
I resemble haze
So elided and sheer
And thanks to His grace
I will soon disappear
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essential
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2010-02-05 06:17:39]
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Re: Who am I?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 06:54:05 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. You can feel the suspense from start to finish.
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Re: Who am I?
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 10:45:15 AM AEST
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I also enjoyed the read,well written.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Who am I?
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by zedwards on
Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 12:04:19 PM AEST
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| reads like a riddle. I would guess the wind or air, but who knows. |
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