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Dull the Pain

Contributed by MoonlightKiss on Thursday, 4th February 2010 @ 10:33:49 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

My heart is not to blame for my head's mistakes
But the more I try to rebuild, the longer it takes
My world crumbles down as you walk away
What have I done? My skies have turned gray.
I am losing my mind; my dignity's already gone
And all that's left of my heart is that stupid love song
It doesn't matter what happens from here
Nothing matters to me if you are not near.

So many choices to try to dull the pain
Which is most efficient? Which will drive me insane?
The cold blade of a knife, driven into my lifeless heart
Or perhaps slit my throat? What a wonderous work of art.
Then there is fire; shall I burn myself alive?
Though I have heart that's a painful way to die
So maybe I'll use rope; break my useless neck
Maybe I'll pull the trigger, right out on my front deck
I think I've got it; I'll take a couple of pills
Thinking of it makes me shiver, and I get the chills.

My friends are not to blame for my decision to die
Nor was I murdered; make an effort not to cry
My world crumbled down when I make that last mistake
So I concluded that leaving was the best choice I could make.

. . .

No wait, please don't go
I don't want to die
Come back and hold me
And tell me not to cry...

Copyright © MoonlightKiss ... [ 2010-02-04 10:33:49]
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Re: Dull the Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 06:06:26 AM AEST
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This really digs deep,shows the confusion of a troubled mind, on the edge.

Well written
Take care
Fuzzy

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