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Two Become One
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 12:58:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hearts fly as love comes alive
Soul renewed each time I look at you
Like a child I bathe in joy
Gifted unto me, a woman made of dreams
Hearts conversion, unaware of the situation
Deeper I fall,
Pulled by the strings that have attached themselves to me
I follow, you lead, an innocent heart sown on my sleeve
I await the day of rejuvenation, amazed, watching love’s creation
Take a step in the right direction
Pass on pain or its manifestation
For today is new, watch my transformation
What was a hollow soul is now filled with love
Send thanks to the heavens, and the man above
Rest peaceful like two white doves
A passionate moment and two become one.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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2010-02-03 12:58:57]
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Re: Two Become One
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 01:53:44 PM AEST
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Beautiful!
Once again, you have blinded me with the immeasurable passion you hold for your soulmate in this life - your wife.
So lovely to see you drop by Phantom, it's always a pleasure.
Take care of yourself......
Star x x x
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Re: Two Become One
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 02:51:30 PM AEST
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Awww Matt, I know you must be counting down the seconds till you are iin your baby's arms again... This is an awesome write...
God speed till that happens....
It was great talking to you last week...
Stay safe and keep that chin up..
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Re: Two Become One
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 06:00:47 PM AEST
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Wow friend,
It's so good to see this romantic, happy write from you.
I'm sure your a great mate but she's gotta be one hell of a woman to be faith full while you're off serving our country.
keep up the post and awesome beautifull writing. You know how concerned i get when you don't grace us with your presence here.
Stay safe, stay happy, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Two Become One
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 10:35:43 PM AEST
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| So much warmth and depth of feeling in this lovely poem,what was a hollow soul is now filled with love,best line for me is the line.... like a child I bathe in joy |
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Re: Two Become One
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by Fuzzy on
Thursday, 4th February 2010 @ 02:48:03 AM AEST
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Truly beautiful write.
Take care
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